Started by Aurora Borealis, September 24, 2012, 12:45:30 AM
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Quote from: Bella on January 20, 2013, 05:04:39 PMDrats! I thought I already commented on the latest storyboard! Anyway, this continues to look really good and I look forward to seeing the finished strip.
QuotePanel 1: [a shot of them drawing their designs on paper] narration: To avoid fighting further over fashion, Multics and Cray-1 turned to designing uniforms to wear during their collaboration... Multics: Whatever you design, make sure it's something I won't freeze to death in Cray-1: I'll try to keep that in mindPanel 2: Cray-1: *looking at Multics' sketch, pen in hand* Those frills aren't necessary Multics: (angry) Hey!Panel 3: Multics *scribbles over Cray-1's sketch* Multics: Well, are those crystal panels necessary?Panel 4: *Cray-1 crumples Multics' sketches*
QuotePanel 1: *Multics throws crumpled sketches at Cray-1*Panel 2: *Cray-1 throws her own crumpled sketches*Panel 3: *SCOPE walks back in, seeing Multics and Cray-1 throwing crumpled paper at each other* SCOPE: Umm... Isn't there a collaboration you're supposed to be doing? ^_^; Panel 4: Cray-1: We're collaborating on-- Multics: Insulting each others' fashion sense! You don't care about fashion, so you wouldn't understand!
Quote from: Bella on May 30, 2014, 06:36:58 PMAlright! Here's an idea using what you have so far. I'm pretty sure SCOPE's supposed to be the Voice Of Reason of the CDC family, so it might be funny if she discovered Multics and Cray-tan fighting and went into stern teacher/mother mode and, I dunno, separated them and sentenced them to time-out or something. I could probably come up with something better, but there's one idea to get the ball rolling. -w-
Quote[SCOPE overhears Multics' and Cray-1's arguments, and facepalms][SCOPE busts in]SCOPE: That's it! Both of you need a time-out! Cray-1: But-- But-- Multics started it!Multics: What? Me?! But you insulted me-- SCOPE: I said... Time Out! Multics and SCOPE: [bows] Yes, SCOPE.