Prototype #2: A OS-Tan fanfic

[Tasha04]

Well, I've decided to write a OS-Tan fanfic to improve my story writing skills, I decided to post the discussion on the forums since there's more people here then on the OSC discord. Basically this topic will be used for the discussion of the fic (as mentioned before), clarifying information and etc. Please keep in mind that I'm not the smartest people so I may need information put into simple words for me to understand and I also come from the land down under (if you get the meme you'll know what I mean) so the grammar that I use may be different to what you use. I'm excited to start finally discussing this to other people!

Edit 1: You can also suggest ideas to implement into the story as well

Description: https://pastebin.com/b4V6ur5f
What I've written so far:
https://pastebin.com/35Rv8sGn